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Yes, this is the character design sheet I was moaning about in todays blog entry [link]

I expect some people will say this isn't good enough to be in my main gallery and should be in scraps. But no one would see it in scraps and thus I'd neverget advice to improve.

Anyway apart from saying that the arms on the full body are wonky as all heck I'm not going to comment on what I think is wrong with it because I want to know if other people seethe same issues I do.

Advice much desired and appreciated.
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well one thing I notice is that she looks flat chested. The two semi-curves in the middle of her chest don't add any depth for me. They might as well be.. well drawn on. I hope that's not too harsh but that's what I see. I will point out that your attempt at expressions is far better than what mine would turn into. I quite like the middle one.